Audition for raging storm studio

i'd like to audition
clip for audition
program used Sony vegas pro 11
anime tokyo ghoul
music dangerkids countdown
inspiration score DisOrder's amv
wish me luck because i want to join this studio

wow good luck joining us

Hey Axel! Sorry this took so long, i had to get a decision from the members .

At the moment we have collectively decided to say no You have some great potential that can be exploited and i would love for you to join RSS! Ao please make a new audition with ought the restraints of an IC and send betas of your edit to myself, Lachevrolait and any of the other members for feedback! Your bases are solid, there are just some re ocuring issues with sync and flow that need to be adjusted.  


I will break down the clip:
- Firstly it is an IC, so it is hard for us to see your true potential.
- At 6 seconds because you chose not to zoom through the eye and cut to the next scene, instead add some blur to it so its smoother and flows a little better.
- At 19 seconds you have gone from an action scene to a very stagnant scene with no movement. Try to keep the rythm and sync
- Same at 47 seconds too stagnant.
- There are some missed beats throughout the edit.
- I do quite like your scene selection and think the overlay at 19 seconds fits the scene quite nicely!
- Lacking impact in some scenes however 1min 33 to 1min 42 is quite nice!

Thanks for auditioning! I hope to hear back from you and help you out with your next audition. You are very close

WilliamClarkAMV wrote:

Hey Axel! Sorry this took so long, i had to get a decision from the members .

At the moment we have collectively decided to say no You have some great potential that can be exploited and i would love for you to join RSS! Ao please make a new audition with ought the restraints of an IC and send betas of your edit to myself, Lachevrolait and any of the other members for feedback! Your bases are solid, there are just some re ocuring issues with sync and flow that need to be adjusted.  


I will break down the clip:
- Firstly it is an IC, so it is hard for us to see your true potential.
- At 6 seconds because you chose not to zoom through the eye and cut to the next scene, instead add some blur to it so its smoother and flows a little better.
- At 19 seconds you have gone from an action scene to a very stagnant scene with no movement. Try to keep the rythm and sync
- Same at 47 seconds too stagnant.
- There are some missed beats throughout the edit.
- I do quite like your scene selection and think the overlay at 19 seconds fits the scene quite nicely!
- Lacking impact in some scenes however 1min 33 to 1min 42 is quite nice!

Thanks for auditioning! I hope to hear back from you and help you out with your next audition. You are very close

thanks for the feed back next time i will do better

No worries! I can't wait to see your next video